Tuesday, November 24, 2020

10 things to take to the sea

1. Water

2. Pillow

3. Blanket

4. Shelter

5. Clothes

6. Books

7. Socks

8. Toilet paper

9. Fishing rod

10. Some more food 


3 comments:

  1. Hi paige I'm Ashlee from Yaldhurst Model School.
    this is a pretty good blog post however.
    I think that you should add a picture just to make it more interesting
    and not just words.
    anyway good job.
    bye:)

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  2. Hello Paige. I like how you did it in a numbered list. Next time, you could write a bit more. Goodbye,from Max.

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  3. Hi paige I'm Mykiala from Yaldhurst Model School.
    I think this is a pretty good blog post but...
    I think that you should add a picture just to make it more interesting
    and not just words so more readers will look at the blog.
    anyway good job.

    BYE!

    MYKIALAYMS

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